Beta, please?

Sooo, I finally finished that Sherlock ficlet and would like someone to beta-read it before I post it. It's about 980 words, rated PG and with just a hint of slash. I haven't had a beta reader in years (well, duh, I mostly write drabbles), but I'd really appreciate an opinion on this, writing for a new fandom always makes me nervous. =/

Also, I think schonste will like this: