IDEK, aka: beta reader needed

[gothikmaus]

So, what did I say I was going to do this afternoon? Draw some Steve/Danny because I've had this idea stuck in my mind for a week but was too sick to actually sit down and draw?

Forget it, I wrote Steve/Danny smut inspired but this very NSFW picture I saw earlier today. *facepalm*

Would anyone be so kind and have a look at it before I post it? It's about 1100 words, Steve/Danny, PWP.

EDIT: Here, have a snippet:

But he was only human. And seeing Steve spread out like that, well. He pressed the palm of his right hand against his fly, trying to adjust himself because suddenly his pants had become unbearably tight.

Fuck, he mentally repeated, fuck fuck fuck. He leaned forward, the tip of his tie brushing the back of Steve's thigh, and the mattress dipped under his weight as he rested a knee on the bed.

Comments

[gothikmaus.livejournal.com]

I haven't written smut in AGES so I'd really prefer if someone read it, but it's just a short PWP, so even if don't find anyone, I'll just re-read it and post it.

Mmh, maybe I could add a little snippet to my post...

[finduilas-clln.livejournal.com]

I'm the same. I can't post without having someone's opinion first! :)

Come on, where are all these beta readers??? *is impatient*

[gothikmaus.livejournal.com]

I rarely ask for a second opinion, but it's been a while since I wrote a PWP and I'm not 100% confident with American English so...

And I'll post it tomorrow anyway, even if I found someone tonight, I won't be online later. But I added a snippet if you'd like an appetizer. ;)

[finduilas-clln.livejournal.com]

NNGH. Who could ever resist Steve spread out like that???

GAH. Yes, you must absolutely post the whole thing as soon as possible!!!! Can't wait. :D

[gothikmaus.livejournal.com]

I'll probably post it in the afternoon. I still have to think of a title, though...

[finduilas-clln.livejournal.com]

Ah yes, titles are the hardest part for me! Can never think of one.

[gothikmaus.livejournal.com]

I've just found a beta! \o/ Hopefully the fic wasn't too awful and I'll be able to post it later tonight. :)

[finduilas-clln.livejournal.com]

WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!