IDEK, aka: beta reader needed

[gothikmaus]

So, what did I say I was going to do this afternoon? Draw some Steve/Danny because I've had this idea stuck in my mind for a week but was too sick to actually sit down and draw?

Forget it, I wrote Steve/Danny smut inspired but this very NSFW picture I saw earlier today. *facepalm*

Would anyone be so kind and have a look at it before I post it? It's about 1100 words, Steve/Danny, PWP.

EDIT: Here, have a snippet:

But he was only human. And seeing Steve spread out like that, well. He pressed the palm of his right hand against his fly, trying to adjust himself because suddenly his pants had become unbearably tight.

Fuck, he mentally repeated, fuck fuck fuck. He leaned forward, the tip of his tie brushing the back of Steve's thigh, and the mattress dipped under his weight as he rested a knee on the bed.

Comments

[gothikmaus.livejournal.com]

Heee, thank you! I'm fixing a few things, I'll send you an email as soon as I'm done! :D

[iam-space.livejournal.com]

Sounds good! UNF that pic! :)

[gothikmaus.livejournal.com]

My brain short-circuited when I saw it!

[iam-space.livejournal.com]

And since that short-circuit caused you to write porn, I'm all for it! Mine basically just relegated me to "staring mode". ;p

[gothikmaus.livejournal.com]

I actually wanted to draw, but then my muse decided she wanted to write smut instead. And who am I to argue?

I've just sent you the fic!